Well, I've turned another map into an adventure for reasons I can't really fathom other than it's fun to do so. I also had a blast working on the layout, I'm pretty happy with how it turned out and am semi-excited to actually do more things in that style. It's sort-of a combination of "descriptive but not too descriptive" and "put tags at the top for ease of content digestion".
The point is still that you have to read ahead of time to digest the content a little, but the tags should keep the contents of the rooms a bit more memorable and pokey.
Anyhow! If you'd like to give it a whirl, it's up here:
Let me know what you think of it, if it's terrible, bland, you love the layout (I hope you love the layout).
In two weeks time we'll be.... starting on another map, maybe. It all depends on how everything shakes out for me in the next couple of weeks, but I'll keep you all posted.